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Love is Blind Until The Pain Comes Alive
Contributed by
MarkMark
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Saturday, 16th June 2012 @ 12:27:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love is blind but still we see the lying cheating heart ..
This stranger we no longer know rips our life apart.
Where is the one who shared my love my precious darling girl?
She's gone away and somehow changed now jaded by the world.
Her perfume fill this empty place it's all that still remains
Of the love we shared so sweet before I went insane
Her empty words and promises lie scattered on the floor.
The bitter trail of pain so cold, her footsteps out the door
I look inside and try to find what caused this to begin.
What made the one I love so dear lust after other men ?
I just don't care this isn't fair it hurts so bad inside .
The burning anger just won't stop I have to kill those guys.
I've almost gone half crazy it seems the pain won't end.
I've changed inside I cannot smile I'll never love again.
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Re: Love is Blind Until The Pain Comes Alive
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2012 @ 11:38:08 PM AEST
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Hey, the feeling in this poem is intense and so well expressed.
I can relate.
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Re: Love is Blind Until The Pain Comes Alive
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 12:26:56 PM AEST
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Powerful emotion. I think you conveyed the message here really well.
Thanks for sharing,
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