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will they never learn
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Of the blame to bare
Ive bore my share
In the lessons in life to learn
And the times I cried
Oh how I cried
And how my heart did yearn
For the wasted years
And my long lost peers
I once left to my past
To escape the days
And forget the ways
The shadows then were cast
But like the rest
I failed the test
When time, it came my turn
But you would think
Id swim or sink
But you know I never learned
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2003-05-09 18:35:00]
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Re: will they never learn
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:20:46 PM AEST
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| It seems I never learned either my friend. As always, your poetry has such deep meaning. Well done once again. Larry |
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Re: will they never learn
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by SomethingClever on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 10:20:46 PM AEST
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| I thought it was good, first 3 lines would be my favorite part though. |
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Re: will they never learn
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM AEST
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Well than I never did either but thats ok!
Great write! Christina |
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Re: will they never learn
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 02:27:43 AM AEST
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| Dear Wordsy, I seem to have missed you and you too my poems.. your message on the forum " ypdc best poet ' reflected my thoughts/ questions beautifully. and my concept of truth& time I have painted in my poems..if can find some time please go through my poem " sacrificial ground' and I will be very glad if poets like you read such poem.. thank you, this one shows your humbleness as well as the yearning of my heart..venkat |
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Re: will they never learn
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 12:22:07 PM AEST
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this is so deep ! i just love it
GINA |
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Re: will they never learn
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 11:16:15 AM AEST
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Well I read your verses
I too have curses
tho' heaven knows I've tried
To learn the way
to be "au fait"
and how to coincide
with others keep
in step to reap
the changes of the tide
alas no luck
my efforts suck
It looks like suicide
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