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sad love
Contributed by
Tiah
on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 08:04:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sitting in my room counting every seconds
Looking at the clock listening to the ticking sounds
Feelings of emotion
drain through my vain
making me cry a mighty rain
i just cant control this pain
you says im yours to be
bt here i am hoping and wishing
that u never leave me
lost from your heart
lost from your eyes
lost from your mind
lost in time
bt still pretending
youre mine
what a fool indeed
to thought you'l grant
my every need
i know its stupid
but what else could i do
my only option left
is to crawl back to you
Copyright ©
Tiah
... [
2012-06-21 08:04:21]
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Re: sad love
(User Rating: 1 )
by nikki080794 on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 04:10:17 PM AEST
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| Beautifully stunning. It really made me feel the desperation that someone could feel from someone they love. It was lovely and very well emotionally expressed! Thanks for sharing :D |
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