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Roll Me Another One
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 02:09:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Music off,
its zig zag lines uncrossed,
Gently attuning
to lilting paths
beckoning the sounds of waves
rocking cradles of wind
that lulled the stars
Into falling
from the sky
like base jumpers
free falling
only without
those awkward parachute tugs.
My soul was sailing
like a rug hypnotised by the dark
reassured by pale moon light
drifting down to his
The waves were whispering stars
Starry eyed
'Its a right new world it is'
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2012-06-21 14:09:19]
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Re: Roll Me Another One
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by TCK on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 04:05:38 PM AEST
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| Wow... that was REALLY good... that poem actually drew me in, made me FEEL the things you wrote about. EXCELLENT imagery and unique form. WELL DONE!!! |
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