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trying to come back
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Sunday, 24th June 2012 @ 07:36:45 AM in AEST
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here I am again
everything is still the same
I'm determined that I will type
although I can't sign my name
I know it will get better
even with a ways to go
this is how I show feelings
it's the only way I know
I woke up at 2 a.m.
as full of pain as I could be
I tip-toed to my computer desk
so noone else would see
I'm so gratefull for my family
my children & my wife
they have all vowed to get me better
they truly are my life
they have put there lives on hold
they do not think I see
there lives seem to revolve around
what is going on with me
these words may have no meaning
but in case someone should ask
I'm starting at the bottom
& this to shall pass
these simple words are so much more
than just writing with a pen
these are my baby steps
to being the hot shot poet once again
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Re: trying to come back
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by nluchett on
Sunday, 24th June 2012 @ 01:39:15 PM AEST
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Welcome back. Very nice write. A wise friend once said to me, "Do what you love, and screw everything else."
Keep writing my friend. |
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Re: trying to come back
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by Action567 on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 04:17:18 AM AEST
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| Your poetry comes from the heart and is very well written. With your family behind you, you will be inspired to write a lot more. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed reading this and want to read more of your work. |
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Re: trying to come back
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by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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Your poem gives the reader optimism
When dear souls move around us
We can face any challenge hopefully
As they give colossal support and love
Please make that dramatic come-back
Enjoy life doing what you love in life
You have beloved souls to assist
All the best my poetic friend, proceed.
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: trying to come back
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by Sasha on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 10:47:34 PM AEST
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| Welcome back, good to see you are back to writing.. |
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Re: trying to come back
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by desire on
Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 12:13:42 AM AEST
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I find you inspiring and determined to be true to
Yourself. Wonderful poem |
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