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Wordsworth Sestet
Contributed by
ramfire
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Sunday, 24th June 2012 @ 06:35:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I am close nearby and thy perfume
doth makes itself now known alluring me,
can I not know delight here close to thee?
Tell me if you too feel this way each time
our meeting mayest yea your mind consume.
If so, let these confessions be sublime
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ramfire
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2012-06-24 18:35:56]
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Re: Wordsworth Sestet
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by Pook on
Sunday, 24th June 2012 @ 08:27:09 PM AEST
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Iambic Pentameter, my cup of tea very nice. Very beautiful words. Its hard to get syllables right and get your point across. You did a very good job and I want more more more.
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Re: Wordsworth Sestet
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 01:02:33 PM AEST
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Very beautifully and skilfully done Sestet.
Iambic pentameter is sill te best, the rhyming scheme is difficult to achieve however. You did a great job!
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