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Together
Contributed by
devim
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Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 07:59:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Fighting together,
With the other me.
Strugling in suffer,
But him I can't see.
That man with secret will,
Sadist sacrificer becoming ill.
Ill from himself, and from his duallity,
Living, not wanting to Be.
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2012-07-02 19:59:06]
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Re: Together
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by TCK on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 08:47:22 PM AEST
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| Nice write, might wanna watch your spelling and grammar, it detracts from the poem. A lot of the tiime we are our own worst enemy, its true. But I've found that God is the one who can give us an identity to be proud of and who can help us find peace and meaning. He's an awesome best friend. :) |
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