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Friendship is divine
Contributed by
Ndobeldinho
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Wednesday, 4th July 2012 @ 12:42:24 AM in AEST
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I'll die a happy man, knowing in my life I knew friendship.
Friendship is divine and you proved that.
Through thick and thin you're there, when I'm lost in the dark you become my light. When I say thanks you just say, "That's what friends are supposed to do".
When I'm in tears, you give me your shoulder. You Ease my pain with your words. Like shelter or food, you became a need in my life. Honestly, you're like the sister I never had.
"when days are dark friends are few",
every time you tend to become one of those few.
Honest and loving you are. How lucky am I to have a friend whom even my darkest secrets I can tell without fear. A friend like you is worth more than all the gold in the world. Rare and priceless you are, that's why I thank God for making you existent in my life.
Ndobeldinho, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.
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Re: Friendship is divine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th July 2012 @ 01:25:22 AM AEST
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Very lovely sentiment. Good expression of love and devotedness. Before it was mod spell checked, there were many errors that you may wish to try and fix yourself as the mod is not always sure what the author is trying to express. There are sometimes assumptions made for the meaning when many spelling errors exist.
Finally, I think it is quite inappropriate to be asking for comments when you yourself have posted four times now yet have only commented once.
Thank you and the usual pleasantries.
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