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INCOMPLETE
Contributed by
lost_word
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm dead in my dream-world / yet i'm never awake / eye's closed morning / to day break / the night skies hide me from all that i hate / MYSELF / no shadows to be seen in my dark room / not even the street lights behind my curtains can find its way through / lying here in agony / but numb from all pain / i close my eye's and drift / never far enough away /
i want everything to go / but the darkness to stay /
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Re: INCOMPLETE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 01:45:11 AM AEST
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I dont get this but it sounds good
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Re: INCOMPLETE
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 02:21:00 AM AEST
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well written ...but those that fear the light must live in darkness
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