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The grass blades of the graves
Contributed by
spiritbody
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Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 04:04:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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The wind tickles the tall grass blades of the graves
And the grass laughs back at the wind
And then stops.
I ponder my existence for a while
All thing are flow
Over the stone wall of the evening sun lit church yard
Is the faint trace of a path
Where the wind went
I will go.
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2012-07-07 16:04:53]
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Re: The grass blades of the graves
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by soulsongs on
Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 05:17:31 PM AEST
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| Where the wind went, I will go - love this line! Nice poem :) |
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Re: The grass blades of the graves
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 06:17:47 PM AEST
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| keep writing |
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Re: The grass blades of the graves
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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nice work thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: The grass blades of the graves
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by JDaw on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 10:58:44 AM AEST
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Awesome write, I like the line about the grass laughing back, with the irony that the grass cannot move, you will walk over it and the wind will move on. Or at least that is my interpretation. Again great poem!
- JDaw |
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