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From Fire to Vengeance
Contributed by
Reverend_T
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Wednesday, 11th July 2012 @ 12:21:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Self righteous fury fires flare
angry hot, and red coals glare
see the rage
and see the stain
his mindless fury
sears the brain
In the forge of hell they sit
roasting souls upon a spit
strike the iron while it seethes
burn a soul with your black deeds
you say it's tough
you say you're fair
you say you've had
your fair share
and yet all we see is one proud man
and before the judge of hell you'll stand
the crowds will jest and loudly jeer
and when you're sentenced we'll gladly cheer
Drawn and quartered
hang or burns
the'll torture you 'till the stomach turns
I'll see you die I swear to god
and afterwards
they'll all applaud.
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2012-07-11 12:21:53]
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Re: From Fire to Vengeance
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by spud on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 08:53:51 AM AEST
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WOW!!
This is vengeance with a capital V.
A well-versed piece that doesn't stop short
of getting the message across.
T
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Re: From Fire to Vengeance
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by Fluttermouse on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 04:32:43 PM AEST
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I really liked this!
Love the way it just flows :)
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Re: From Fire to Vengeance
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 08:05:43 PM AEST
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| You've captured the anger in your heart toward a certain person with this poem. Your word picture is very graphic. |
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