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Soldier
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 05:41:48 PM in AEST
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With broken bone and rendered arm I walk among the sand,
and as i watch my brothers die, while reaching for my hand,
i bring myself to a better place, a fortress in my mind,
where lovers never fall apart, and friends will never die,
And as i walk in pools of blood, escaping all the pain,
I think about a sweeping plain, with signs of coming rain,
and when my eyes return to death, and sadness without end,
I walk with steps that don't exist... a reality that bends.
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2012-07-12 17:41:48]
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Re: Soldier
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 07:09:48 PM AEST
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So sad but beautifully written
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th July 2012 @ 03:17:33 PM AEST
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This is a great write. I however think that the reality that bends or that fortress in your mind just may be your own heaven.
Thanks,
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