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So naked
Contributed by
workinprogress
on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 12:00:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I've been stripping away the false narratives
I've been telling myself
the false self
the ego
With a flick of the wrist
I swipe away
layer after layer
It can be so cold
so scary
To be so naked
Things I once forgot
arise again
Memories flood back
like a refreshing storm
Where will I go?
Who will I be?
I find me
once again
under the sun
aware of the false narratives
not needing their warmth
any longer
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2012-07-17 12:00:44]
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Re: So naked
(User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 12:07:05 PM AEST
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| interesting write. |
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Re: So naked
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by gypsymaddness on
Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 06:31:56 PM AEST
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| I'm stuned by the depth you put in this with so few sentences, with so few words. Amazing isn't enough. Maybe outstanding. With every letter is another ache to the heart. Whatever memorys that stabs into your mind, I hope you can heal it. Great work. |
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