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If I Was A Man...
Contributed by
markymark
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Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 08:58:10 PM in AEST
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if i was a man that could say i'm sorry for all the wrong i brought to you if i was a man that would have you believe that what you see is what you get i'm sorry yes for the past but whilst being there i never knew the present i was in... i didnt realise till its the past and the past is not so much to late to change just hard to alter...
if i was a man, that said things i never followed through i dont think i was... i'm funny like that do as i say and back up what i believe i'll be home by eight and i turn up late droped off home by an anonymous mate here he comes...in a right oul state... my watch had stopped... well before eight...
if i was a man you couldnt trust...you know me far to well i never set out to deceive you... upset you...annoy you i cant help myself sometimes opposites attract or so they says were chalk and cheese in so many ways we could all walk back to some other days but if we knew back then... what we know now who's any wiser, would we be somehow...
if i was a man that cried in front of you showed you the real me... the one i hide behind the mask of i'm ok but when i'm not ok....who do i show myself to? who's decent enough to be there... to care...
if i was a man that held you at night not a sinner about... not a soul in sight no thought to me... i'm holding you silence, tranquil, "they said its true" to bare ones soul, to be exposed pure joy, relief, as apposed to being what you just cant be i am the man...the man thats me...
by MDM...4/8/02...
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Re: If I Was A Man...
(User Rating: 1 ) by chatabox on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 06:09:35 AM AEST (User
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bravo!..what an excellant piece of poetry..... |
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Re: If I Was A Man...
(User Rating: 1 ) by markymark on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 07:32:36 AM AEST (User
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Thank you for your kind words on my poem "if i was a man"...its nice of you to take the time to share your opinion...i'm glad you enjoyed reading it...i feel it was over the heads of a few here, i dont think they understood it in all its simplicity...anyway thanks again...Mark x |
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