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Angel of Life
Contributed by
Sam24
on
Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 10:38:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Something I was not I tried to be,
cold as stone,
in a cruel world all alone,
I thought death would be
my final remedy..
I was heading straight towards the darkness,
prayed the heavens, 'give me some answers'.
Then you pulled me back in to the light,
you made my world again seem right,
with your respect for life, humanity,
your peaceful smile it sets me free..
At start I had my doubts, I confess.
'Is this too good to be true,
will I eventually forget you..'
But deep in heart I knew,
you're not another temptress..
Well I don't know where this path takes me to,
but it surely can't be bad, when I can share it all with you.
This connection between you and me,
in it's divine beauty,
something I thought, I could never see..
When I look deep in your eyes,
I see no hatred, I see no lies,
I see only love that's pure,
and I believe, I believe it will
endure..
I guess fate did interfere,
but in the end it was up to you and me,
the harmony of two human beings,
angel of life,
you've set me free..
Copyright ©
Sam24
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2012-07-23 10:38:09]
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Re: Angel of Life
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 03:45:01 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this, don't worry about what's technical and what's not. You definitely put your emotions into words and that's what counts. I'm glad the story had a nice conclusion, make sure you hold on to that special person! |
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Re: Angel of Life
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by sexyfam on
Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 05:24:51 PM AEST
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| This poem was very nice and well put together. You put so much of your emotions in it, that's why I puke it so much. Great poem |
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Re: Angel of Life
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 30th March 2018 @ 03:49:26 AM AEST
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| Nice work indeed!!!! |
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