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Vicacious Violet
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 08:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Marvelous in hue and petite in stature
Ever appealing to the eye you are
Do you meditate on such praise
As you perform in nature's theatrical
Pray tell how do you maintain your vivacity
By-and-by your vulnerability is revealed
Reveling in Heavenly Beams you secure your
Floral heart by stretching toward the East
Frantic that the Sun is in search of another to shine on
Oh how conditionally depressed you grow in solitude
As you hang your petal-adorned head in the eve
Yet on the splendid summer days you are a vivacious violet
Safe from worries of the night and Winter's chill
I too mirror your emotional pattern
Perhaps we can learn together to find the sun
And it's warmth in everything despite the foreshadowings
Of Inclimatw Weather
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
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2012-07-23 20:27:41]
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Re: Vicacious Violet
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 03:21:48 AM AEST
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| I love the beautiful and varied use of imagery and tone in the poem. It was really enjoyable to read! Nice work! :) |
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Re: Vicacious Violet
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 05:33:19 AM AEST
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| Perhaps we together can learn to find the sun.......the concept is as warm as the heart behind the words. |
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Re: Vicacious Violet
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by richard2 on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 09:22:56 AM AEST
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Some great beauty in some fine lines.
I have always like imagery in poetry, and flowers
are everything to imagery. They are god's gift
to poets (and to everyone else also). I enjoyed this very much
take care and write more like this
Richard |
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Re: Vicacious Violet
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by soulsongs on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 09:28:45 PM AEST
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| Nice work! Love the nature poems! |
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Re: Vicacious Violet
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by flavellm on
Saturday, 10th November 2012 @ 11:21:22 AM AEST
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| stunning write, incredibly well crafted piece that |
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