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Sunrise of An Eternity
Contributed by
soulsongs
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Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 01:57:05 PM in AEST
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Each sunrise holds a new lie.
Brought forth are confrontations
With paper faces.
Their voices attack you from behind
And descend critical fears
To create doubt on self-worth.
I have reached the surface
Of once my soul alone.
I am a spectre of roadless miles.
I have passed through deceivingly counterfeit eternities
Created from the depths of evil
From all the world.
I shall now guide us
To a true eternity.
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Re: Sunrise of An Eternity
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 02:52:54 PM AEST
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| The only eternity is the one none of us will ever see. Good poem. keep writing. |
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Re: Sunrise of An Eternity
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by richard2 on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 01:16:38 AM AEST
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Interesting poem, thought provoking
I like it
Does the sun rise in paradise?
The sun is earth - eternity is beyond
The world is wind
there is meaning in a leaf
Life is the white rose of love
Where the only paradise awaits
The last eternity is ahead
The valley is beautiful
For the soul to walk
Hand and hand with god
Poetry is the link between
take care
Richard
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