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Painted Smile
Contributed by
sebgreen
on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 08:46:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Artist of deception
You take your palette
Of human emotions
To your blank canvas
And thereupon splatter
Paint and scrawl
A sarcastic ghost
A fallacious leer
A fraudulent lure.
The veneer is thin
My friend
And the truth
Black and yellow
Is oozing from your pores
The mask is falling,
Falling--
Dripping from your chin to the ground
And your eyes
Plea for sympathy
Plea for understanding.
Speak your mind
Always
Never hide
Behind a painted smile.
Copyright ©
sebgreen
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2012-07-25 08:46:01]
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Re: Painted Smile
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 08:57:41 PM AEST
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Quite creative and descriptive! I like how the "mask falling" is dramatized. Goes to show: genuinity prevails,
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Re: Painted Smile
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by soulsongs on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 09:20:35 PM AEST
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| My favorite line... palette of human emotions... Nice job on this entire poem :) |
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