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Think of me
Contributed by
rasberry
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Saturday, 28th July 2012 @ 11:06:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I once filled your thoughts,
I once filled your life,
I once was known as the only child.
It seems that what once was is no longer,
I never hoped to have a future with an absent father.
When you spend time with them please think of me.
When you look at them run and play, does that not make you reminisce
When you put them to bed with a goodnight kiss,
Am I not someone worthy of you to miss?
Is it because I have been replaced?
If so..better that than disowned.
Will you not think of me?
Have I become a faint memory?
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rasberry
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2012-07-28 11:06:17]
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Re: Think of me
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 29th July 2012 @ 05:15:53 PM AEST
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I'm surprised there haven't been more comments on this and that I am the first.
I thought it was a very powerful and emotive write, it certainly made me sit up and take note.
Here's to many more.
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Re: Think of me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th August 2012 @ 04:13:20 AM AEST
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| This is a beautifully articulated and powerful poem. Great and very moving poetry. |
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