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so killer no point
Contributed by
apartment213
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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random hearts saved blind everything uve ever needed feeling protesting scratching bleeding holding and breathing being a victim under watch guards eye mr. eagle view on his thrown throwing us around breaking plates devouring the kids holding onto their bikes who cry over candy and skinned knees flirty girl swerves ur way u grin wave on this day all seems equal wheres the bland sun who shows us these things with its killer lights lets die alone on moutain tops all alone
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Re: so killer no point
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:25:25 PM AEST
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awww, kenny i love it...shows so much emotion and everything, so great...the free writes are always great, keep it up... i love you paint mongoose
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Re: so killer no point
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by SomethingClever on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 09:56:49 PM AEST
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| I liked this free write... I think you used the wrong word, maybe I'm wrong, maybe you are being artistic. The first thrown - throne right? |
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Re: so killer no point
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by Apartment213 on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:48:03 PM AEST
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| okay u got me....but thats what i get for correcting everyone all the time....so ***** YOU |
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