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Triolet
Contributed by
ramfire
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Monday, 30th July 2012 @ 05:52:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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My love of family I do not place on self
Baubles of life are here controlling naught of things.
One hawks sweet enticement like a small candy elf.
My love of family I do not place on self
Booty that makes us rich gains but a shoddy pelf.
Family time is togetherness, pleasure it brings.
My love of family I do not place on self.
Baubles of life are here controlling naught of things.
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ramfire
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2012-07-30 17:52:59]
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Re: Triolet
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 30th July 2012 @ 08:34:33 PM AEST
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"My love of family I do not place on self." What an excellent reminder of love's true nature: selflessness. Altogether intriguing and creatively written this is,
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Re: Triolet
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 12:01:31 AM AEST
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Great write.
blessings,
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