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trying to fix me
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 06:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I thought I could fix anything
that my eye's could clearly see
but until now I never thought about
trying to fix me
my kids call me the fix it man
a name I'm proud to hold
I make them smile when their unhappy
at least this is what I'm told
it's always been apart of me
to simply make a smile
for anyone that would cross my path
it only took a little while
I thank god for my children
for with them I know I'm blessed
but I just cannot figure out
how I became such a mess
no matter what I try to do
there is always something not Right
no matter what it's based upon
though I try with all my might
anymore I just brush it off
to what has to be will be
it is my major imperfection
trying to fix me
the hot shot poet
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Re: trying to fix me
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 07:47:10 PM AEST
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Wow, it was as if i was just looking in a mirror just now. I am exactly the same way! I have just learned to believe that my place here on earth is to help others and in doing so, my own path will be guided. I love to make others happy and make them smile after they have been feeling so depressed or sad. That alone gives me energy, but i always wonder why i am sad inside.
Thanks for sharing this poem with us, really a great write.
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Re: trying to fix me
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 09:23:35 AM AEST
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Sometimes we need a little helping fixing things instead of trying to do it all on your own.
Other people see the things we miss.
Maybe this is where the problem lies.
Nice work
Steve |
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Re: trying to fix me
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by desire on
Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 07:10:21 PM AEST
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You'll figure it out.
I enjoyed reading it a lot
Shirlee
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