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once again in time
Contributed by
spooky
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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once again,,
away from the things that i love,,
wife,,children,,family,,
start a new life ,,
in a far distance place,,
still i will miss them,,
till the day when Iam able,,
to see there smiling faces,,
joy once again it will be,,
work isnt great here,,
better offer in a distance place,,
trouble time befall us here,,
take shelter some where else,,
looking for answers once again,,
they say no matter where you go,,
trouble will befall you there as well,,
but if your eye's are set,,
on the things that make right,,
then you will see,,answers,, once again,,
friends forever,,it will be,,
hopes and dreams,,
they will be,,
long for life it must be ,,
for tomorrow might not be,,
look for the things,,
that makes you happy,,
search your heart,, you will see,,
if makeing a stand in this distance place,,
i will look for the things,,
that people cherish there,,
once again,,
i search,,I will find,,
i will feel,,the diffrents,,
we must make amends with ourselfs,,
to find the thing thats missing,,
where ever it may be,,
look for it,,you will find it,,
wont be here for awhile,,
time is takeing its toll on me,,
searching for a better life,,
in this distance place,,
wish me luck,,
for the thing i search for,,
happiness with my family,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2003-05-10 11:35:00]
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Re: once again in time
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 12:22:45 PM AEST
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Craig this is another great poem. How long will you be gone? You will be missed here!! Goodluck too you!!
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Re: once again in time
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 01:07:31 PM AEST
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Craig, you and your wonderful poetry will be missed so much.. I wish you all the best in your venture.... don't be a stranger thoi..ok.
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Jenni |
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Re: once again in time
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 01:42:00 PM AEST
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| wishing you all good happy things and many smiles in your travels, much beauty and peace, don't forget there are libraries and net cafe's so you can pop in and see us, you'll be missed muchly, be safe, hugs nessa |
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Re: once again in time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 06:31:45 PM AEST
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wishing you safety on your journey where ever it may take you...still waiting comment last poem...was I right?
Phsyco Dolphin |
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Re: once again in time
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 02:21:26 PM AEST
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| I hope you the best on your journey your work will be greatly missed here,We will be thinking of you! God Bless! Christina |
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Re: once again in time
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by TropicaDextrose on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 05:32:55 AM AEST
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i enjoy this to every extent i was able. if you can find time read one of mine and say all you can. now to the commentary.
i believe most of the comments are sappy, so... some of this i think was trite and some was uplifting; some was simple and some spoke to me and some didn't.
my favorite line is "we must make amends with ourselves"
and...
the line i disliked the most was " away from the things that i love"
thank you for your open ear (in advance) in the open forum. |
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