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Mother Nature's Flood
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Saturday, 11th August 2012 @ 08:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Under the clouds all burns,
giving mother nature what she yearns,
And in the sun you will see the pain,
As the tears of mother nature rain,
A snow of ash and blood,
Welcome to mother nature's flood.
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lonelywolf04
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2012-08-11 08:36:52]
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Re: Mother Nature's Flood
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by FragileStrength on
Thursday, 30th August 2012 @ 03:46:17 PM AEST
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| This was really good, I loved the way you rhymed it. But I think on line 5 you need more syllables, I kind of stumbled there because it was so short. But this was definitely well written. |
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