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Parasite
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 12th August 2012 @ 09:02:22 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Incognito soul,
a leech inside a cocoon,
Never changing form
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2012-08-12 21:02:22]
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Re: Parasite
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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I'm sorry to hear anything bad has happened to you. I suppose the only good is that experiences make for great poetry and here is an example ^^.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Parasite
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 06:46:42 PM AEST
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| I like it. It was refreshing. |
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Re: Parasite
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by ming on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 03:35:46 PM AEST
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Your metaphors are profound. I always read you...
ming |
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Re: Parasite
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 11:33:01 PM AEST
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| every line is very well thought out, your word choices are always very descriptive. even for a haiku |
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