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Missing You
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 10:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Missing you
Why does one feel so lost, when they're missing the one they love?
Why does every second, every minute, seem to go on for many hours?
What makes one's heart race so fast, just with the thoughts of you?
Is it because I have finally found, a love that is ever so true.
Why are we so connected, even though we are miles apart?
Why is this now happening, even though it is just our start?
Why did I fall in love with you?, and yes it was at first sight.
Was it fate that brought us together?, upon that wonderful night.
Many questions remain unanswered, yet I love you with all my heart
And now I find I pray and pray, for the day when we are never apart.
Jasmin please believe me, and of this you can be assured
I will never give up on our love, until together forever more.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2012-08-13 22:59:49]
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th August 2012 @ 12:57:21 AM AEST
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I'm wishing you two the best, Mick and hope you're together permanently very very soon.
Oh, and I like the poem a lot.
Tim |
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Re: Missing You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th January 2013 @ 11:36:56 AM AEST
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Good write, friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Missing You
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 26th January 2013 @ 06:56:08 PM AEST
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Pure, deep, and tender all in one here...
-Ambivalence |
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Re: Missing You
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by Sasha on
Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 12:50:39 AM AEST
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| Lovely! Love, exactly the way it is meant to be.. |
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Re: Missing You
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by Dodey on
Sunday, 14th July 2013 @ 08:44:06 AM AEST
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| Emotional and heartfelt with some great rhyming couplets and imagery..I am sure many will relate to this work ..I felt your sadness and I hope your story has a happy ending soon...Regards and Blessings...Dee |
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