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Feeling it
Contributed by
workinprogress
on
Tuesday, 14th August 2012 @ 01:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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What do you know?
you don't know
It's all clouded
I've been there
I am not judging
You think it's easier?
It seems so
Though how do you know?
you don't know
What is it like to feel?
I do not know
It's all new to me
The forgetting, the escape
It all seems so easy
Have you seen?
Seen what you look like?
It is not pretty
Not proud
Embarrassing
Uncomfortable
Ugly
I'm here to help
Let me
Doesn't that feel better?
Now can you feel?
Feel...
Feel...
Feel...
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workinprogress
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2012-08-14 13:57:38]
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Re: Feeling it
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 01:55:42 PM AEST
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| I liked the ways you words draw from one side to another. It begs the mind to follow, to think, to see. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P. |
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Re: Feeling it
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by thehotshotpoet on
Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 07:38:38 PM AEST
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very good writing
thanks for sharing
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