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I wish and doubt
Contributed by
lee6787
on
Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 12:02:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wish not To be here
I wish my Life
to not Be clear
Give me no Solace
give me no love
My only Wish
could Be granted
From above
Yet it chooses not to hear
It ignores me
So clear
this Almighty mind
That gives me hope
Is nothing more than
Terrors horoscope
That is the reason you
Are here
To define these
Reasons that
Seem so
Unclear
Give me my mind
And give me my dreams
For without them
I am completely
Unseen
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2012-08-17 00:02:43]
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Re: I wish and doubt
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by FragileStrength on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 06:22:03 PM AEST
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| I had to read this twice, and I'm still not sure if I can tell how you're feeling. I like to feel what the poet does when I read poems. I felt your frustration, and I think I felt a little desperation and sadness. Desperate for the answer you asked, and sad because you know you won't an answer. I really enjoyed this though. (I enjoyed it enough to read it twice :) ) |
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