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reassembled
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 04:19:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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in a poem
gazing
time opens
solo
and disappears
under
the infernal pen
to wake in me
possessions
claimed
adapted
abandoned
as it is
or might have
been
sounding lost
on and on
needing
creation
a case of letters
unjumbled
and a hush
taking aim
under whispers
from
failed
lips.
Copyright ©
ming
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2012-08-19 16:19:14]
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Re: reassembled
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by elle on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST
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| Mmmmm. . . Nice. . . elle |
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Re: reassembled
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:22:41 AM AEST
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True art. A carousel of intellectual girth.
The level of penmanship and delivery,
(you) always astounds me.
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Re: reassembled
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by spud on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:44:14 AM AEST
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Hi Ming,
I'm not an ''abstract'' type of person - probably
told you that before. But I can't help
observing that there is a unique beauty to
your style of poetry that I can't resist,
although I sometimes struggle to grasp its
true meaning. Keep writing and I'll keep
grasping.
Tommy
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Re: reassembled
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by duff on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 03:57:16 PM AEST
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You really know how to send my mind into a frenzy and I adore that about your writing. Always have. Such creativity and a style like no other. At times all we have is our thoughts and that can never be wrong. The certainty of our pages is concrete and our words are forever. Always a pleasure to read your work.
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Re: reassembled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 12:57:28 AM AEST
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Very panoramic...quite interesting even if I don't fully understand it...or at all. But those are sometimes the most enjoyable to read. The mystery adds excitement.
I could not help but think of people playing Scrabble when I read this part:
a case of letters
unjumbled
Thank you,
Tim
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