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The Plan
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
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Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 12:00:17 PM in AEST
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There's a blue print on hand, for every due plan.
Stone rows insted of houses, no more private land.
No crops will grow here, genetic modification - now reign's king.
Surveillence; the bailiff, the judge, the jury.
There's a blue print on hand, for the way we should live.
Eyes to the ground, hearts full of fear.
No secrets be revealed, which won't be diverted.
More bodies on the front line -
A duty an honor.
There's a blue print on hand, for those who pose a threat.
Defamation, complication, loved one's bereft.
No more saviors to speak of; they've all been laid to rest.
If the picture's getting clearer now, hence - the plan.
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UNORTHODOX
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2012-08-21 12:00:17]
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Re: The Plan
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by duff on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 03:52:12 PM AEST
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Seeing your name attached to something always makes me smile. As I'm reading this I can feel the noose tightening around my neck just like everything else in the present state of this world. This is the reality and your words are provoking and you never let me down with your delivery. There for sure is a plan and not many of us are in it. Direct and moving. Great work my friend. Always.
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Re: The Plan
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by desire on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 10:05:31 PM AEST
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As aways you are brilliant what a wonderful straight in your
Face full of truth poem. Because there is definitely a blue print. I could go on and on but you have inspired a poem in my heart. I. Am so thankful to have found your poems
You helped me find my true voice
thanks for that
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Re: The Plan
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by ming on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 12:47:34 PM AEST
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Great message. It kept me hooked to the last word. And made me feel so not-alone.
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Re: The Plan
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by xanvier on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 09:48:30 PM AEST
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| it's not so great when everything goes not according to plan but it doesn't mean you stopped there, you have to keep building more plans until one succeeds... nice and beautiful poetry... |
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