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under one blanket
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 02:02:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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some scars
as secret
passwords
or
unfinished
poems
their mysterys
meet me
after nightfall
wider
in each
sentence
the strange
glitter
the dark
turmoil
day-sleeping
night owls
dip feathers
in black ink
and smear
blank
pages.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2012-08-22 14:02:46]
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Re: under one blanket
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 11:58:33 AM AEST
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| I like this. I think or failures and hurts give us power, so long as we don't give up. |
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Re: under one blanket
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by devie89 on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 01:58:10 PM AEST
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| Loved this piece. Keep it up :) |
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Re: under one blanket
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 25th August 2012 @ 07:08:56 AM AEST
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Nothing short of elite.Your signature is unique.
I am never unimpressed with your work
This passage is another classic.
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: under one blanket
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by spud on
Friday, 31st August 2012 @ 07:07:58 AM AEST
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Hi Ming,
Your trademark shines once again.
Beautifully scripted.
Tommy
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