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Time in Life
Contributed by
xanvier
on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 08:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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there's a time in life
when it has all began
your eyes full of happiness
your face seems so real
i cried shredded in tears of joy
then i realized
it's almost a dream...
there's a time life
when it has all to be ended
your eyes full of depression
your face seems so sad
i cried shredded in tears of sorrow
when i realized
it's not a dream...
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2012-08-23 20:49:14]
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Re: Time in Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by FragileStrength on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 06:51:17 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was such a contrasted difference in the two stanzas. It was very touching to read what you wanted to happen, and what was happening. It was beautiful and sad. |
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