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DIAMOND BONES
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Friday, 24th August 2012 @ 03:41:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Airplanes hung above
In my heaven, up above
Cables, wires, intertwined
With my veins deep inside
I'm flying, flying
To a heaven with no wings
Like a broken kite
With torn up strings.
Like a fallen ceramic doll
My face has cracked open
And even though,
I might not be real
I felt the pain you always feel
Copyright ©
plasticherry
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2012-08-24 03:41:54]
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Re: DIAMOND BONES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 02:29:24 PM AEST
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| Hmmmm...interesting. Like the touch of empathy with the last line. Nice. |
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Re: DIAMOND BONES
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by FragileStrength on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 06:54:37 PM AEST
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Wow, this was amazing. I loved how the poem shifted with the last line.
I have to say I was looking for poems that didn't have any comments on them, because I feel like they should all be commented on. And I wasn't going to read yours because it had a comment. But your title drew me in, and man am I glad. I really enjoyed this, and I don't know why, I just really liked it. It's definitely one I'd come back to read over and over. |
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