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Night Owl
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
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Saturday, 25th August 2012 @ 09:32:35 AM in AEST
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The solemn hour two in the a.m.
Magnitudes of peace
Branch from trees in harmony
The moonlight glows with passion
Like a lullaby it soothes
Silhouettes praise the sky
As stars shine down un judging
Chiming serenely
Is the tranquility of silence
Subtly the wind journeys on
The atmosphere surrenders
To the briskness of it's shadow
Without effort perfection breathes
In moments to come
this solitude will evaporate
As water into steam
Life into dream
Inevitably dawn will shine
For all to be seen
But it's by night I flourish
Copyright ©
UNORTHODOX
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2012-08-25 09:32:35]
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Re: Night Owl
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by desire on
Saturday, 25th August 2012 @ 11:15:12 AM AEST
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| Wonderful as always |
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Re: Night Owl
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 26th August 2012 @ 05:54:46 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, can feel each and every detail wrapped up in descriptive atmosphere, I love silhouettes and the peace they are part of, great line....... the atmosphere surrenders to the briskness of its shadow......this lovely piece is breathable. |
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Re: Night Owl
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by duff on
Monday, 27th August 2012 @ 02:46:51 PM AEST
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Wonderfully descriptive and you captured the essence of evening in such a peaceful manner that it carries a calm throughout the lines. There is plenty of depth to sink ones teeth into and that is a constant in your writing. Well done again.
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