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Crickets
Contributed by
unorthodox
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Saturday, 25th August 2012 @ 02:25:51 PM in AEST
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Mud on your boots brand new rug
Life after death touched by a ghost
Forgot the words that would set you free
Time after time
Crickets
Broken hearts and broken promises
A broken harp with brand new strings
Just one chance to get it right
Time after time
Crickets
One way street with two way traffic
An open wound no room to heal
Telling a joke yet no one else laughs
Time after time
Crickets
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2012-08-25 14:25:51]
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Re: Crickets
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th August 2012 @ 11:48:11 PM AEST
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I saw this title and thought about how the sound crickets make is produced. Temperature and the physical dynamics that make a detectable sound.
And you also include the interlude of bucolic memories.
Thank you for sharing a very nice work!
Peace! |
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Re: Crickets
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by desire on
Thursday, 29th November 2012 @ 12:31:19 AM AEST
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| I love this I read it several times its kinda errie but oh so on point. Kudos well done my friend |
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