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GLASS TONGUE
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 01:54:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Our glass tongues touched
One summer night
I heard a faint sound
Of moaning stars
I felt your heat
One summer night
It charred my skin
As you came near
In the shade
One summer night
We sat in silence
A discarded pack of cigarettes
Far from my view
We floated away
On a lunar rock
Copyright ©
plasticherry
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2012-08-29 13:54:54]
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Re: GLASS TONGUE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 02:23:19 PM AEST
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This is too cool. Love it!
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Re: GLASS TONGUE
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by FragileStrength on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 04:45:10 PM AEST
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| This was amazing, it was almost sensual. I enjoyed the style in how you wrote it, well done. |
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Re: GLASS TONGUE
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by StacyLynnG on
Thursday, 30th August 2012 @ 11:44:13 AM AEST
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| Truly enjoyed the poem, the fist line set the entire mood brilliantly |
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