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Dr. Izzie Steven's Pain
Contributed by
FragileStrength
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Thursday, 30th August 2012 @ 03:38:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It hurts
everywhere.
It doesnt drift in and out
it just hurts.
A constant pain
thats always there.
Every time I close my eyes
hes there.
I see his face
I can feel him.
But I dont remember
the sparkle in his eye
that I fell in love with.
Or the laughter in his voice
That warmed my stomach
and made me feel safe.
Hes already gone
but Im still losing him.
At first I was stunned.
I didnt have time to react
to understand
I didnt have time to feel this pain.
But now,
now that its his memory I'm loosing
I can react
I can understand
and I feel this pain.
The fading memories are slow
are deliberate
and each one pierces my heart
until I cry.
Every where
It hurts everywhere.
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Re: Dr. Izzie Steven's Pain
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 30th August 2012 @ 05:49:20 PM AEST
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" He’s already gone but I’m still losing him "
Beautiful work, ur line above was riveting
ur a poets poet . . .
ty 4 ur comment
Ben :)
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Re: Dr. Izzie Steven's Pain
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by plasticherry on
Friday, 31st August 2012 @ 08:24:31 AM AEST
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| :( awwww such a sad poem. it was definitely a good read and I do agree with the comment above, I liked that line a lot as well. |
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Re: Dr. Izzie Steven's Pain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st August 2012 @ 08:25:28 AM AEST
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I read the description and, to be honest, didn't think there'd be much emotional engagement.
You certainly proved me wrong. Beautiful, emotive writing.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Dr. Izzie Steven's Pain
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by NightMareShoGun on
Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 10:27:57 PM AEST
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| really good |
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