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Underneath the trees
Contributed by
unorthodox
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Saturday, 1st September 2012 @ 02:44:06 PM in AEST
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I tried to write it down
Before it got away
It's my voice in this ink
And it wearing me thin
The truth only dawns me
In words escaping
Opened the sum of bravery
With a machanical souvenir
Betrayal is a broken heart
Whether it be a work of genius
Or a word that fits
The mind is a masterpiece
Weighed by methods understood
Are the context of importance
Blown by forces like the wind
I ponder these proclivities
Underneath the trees enlightened
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2012-09-01 14:44:06]
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Re: Underneath the trees
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by Waynster on
Saturday, 1st September 2012 @ 04:44:21 PM AEST
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Sounds like what i was trying to say in my poem, only i used basic words and you used exponential words of whit! Great job!
wayne |
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Re: Underneath the trees
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 22nd September 2012 @ 02:04:51 AM AEST
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| opening two lines... story of my life. :) and this poem reflects them well. |
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