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Paper Doll
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Monday, 3rd September 2012 @ 09:31:45 PM in AEST
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So beautiful in the mirror
Grotesque recollection
Comb out the flaws
Hair torn affection
Dancing in fear
Misstep perfection
Breathing on pause
Respire selection
Gaze in vain
Self-righteous infection
Dissected skin antipathy
Encroached incision
Sacrificial dignity
Hysterical illusion
Premeditated shame
Solicited protection
One too many glances at your crimson vanity
Will lead to your narcissistic insanity
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2012-09-03 21:31:45]
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Re: Paper Doll
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by FragileStrength on
Thursday, 6th September 2012 @ 03:32:19 PM AEST
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| I loved this. The way you wrote it had a very cool effect. The normal print had a different emotional feel to it than the italics. The italics were very angry throughout. But the normal font led into being angry so that both of them were just spouting off anger. This was great. |
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Re: Paper Doll
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by Malevolent33 on
Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 08:35:08 PM AEST
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| ashamed to say ... couldn't really put together what you are talking about... would you mind to give me clarification? |
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