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To punctuate or not to punctuate?
Contributed by
spud
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Tuesday, 4th September 2012 @ 09:38:29 AM in AEST
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Poetry-reading is a pleasure;
consuming each line in rhythm
with steady breathing:
a comma has its moment,
a semi-colon a moment longer,
the colon allowing inhalation and exhalation,
and then ......
the full-stop - for maximum appreciation.
Like love-making, where punctuation
is in accordance with age and aptitude.
Well ..... we don't want to rush things,
do we?
Copyright ©
spud
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2012-09-04 09:38:29]
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Re: To punctuate or not to punctuate?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th September 2012 @ 11:31:53 AM AEST
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Certainly a hot topic that I may have ruffled a few feathers about. So, yeah, um, I'll try and keep my opinion to myself.
However, I'll state my opinion about the poem. I love it and it gave me a smile. Thank you, Sir Tommy!
Tim |
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Re: To punctuate or not to punctuate?
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 5th September 2012 @ 01:14:10 PM AEST
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Naughtiness at its very best Tommy.
Real greatly enjoyable naughtiness!! :-) :-) :-)
Smiles and blessings
Elizabeth
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Re: To punctuate or not to punctuate?
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by shanat on
Wednesday, 5th September 2012 @ 06:12:17 PM AEST
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| I`m hopless at punk...punch....punshawation...haha, great poem thanks for posting:) |
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Re: To punctuate or not to punctuate?
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 6th September 2012 @ 09:20:20 AM AEST
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| More knee vicar lol, well that got me giggling with delight,if the naughtiness within this hasn't shown a little devil through it's words then esp after that last line it sure has one reading it right now!!!You are naughty....... but I do like you xx |
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Re: To punctuate or not to punctuate?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th September 2012 @ 10:08:45 AM AEST
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I think we all got some naughty.
Great write and a great conversation with it.
Big smiles,
emy |
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Re: To punctuate or not to punctuate?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 01:18:45 PM AEST
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i love this, well done poet:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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