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Fire's Scream`
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Tuesday, 11th September 2012 @ 04:38:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drop this up and raise it down,
Turning this world round and round,
No one there to hear the sound,
Of this city burning to the ground.
I can hear the fire's scream,
Eating away at my self-esteem,
Destruction of the most extreme,
Erasing everything it would seem.
What once was a happy memory,
Now feeding the misery,
Of a life made beastly,
And shadowed bloodily.
Copyright ©
lonelywolf04
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2012-09-11 16:38:18]
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Re: Fire's Scream`
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th September 2012 @ 08:59:16 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write,especially,considering. the day it is.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Fire's Scream`
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 12th September 2012 @ 05:16:27 PM AEST
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| I like the contrast in this, its always hard trying to keep the artistry juices flowing but you did it in this poem quite nicely |
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Re: Fire's Scream`
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 12:50:20 PM AEST
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I like the way this one flowed
well done |
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