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Imperfect Humanity
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 20th September 2012 @ 02:51:16 AM in AEST
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holding tight while sorrow sleeps,
such deep emotions all released,
sinking into soft reflection,
drinking in my thoughts... inspection,
mold with clay... that turns to stone,
wandering the world alone,
thoughtless cries call out your name,
come the light... and cease the rain,
blindly beating through the brush,
with nothing but the softest touch,
a pitter-patter melts the silence,
life's reality must be violence,
sitting on our porcelain thrones,
abandoning the earth... our home,
ignorance it runs amiss,
for ignorance is truly bliss.
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deusdeira
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2012-09-20 02:51:16]
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Re: Imperfect Humanity
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by spud on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 10:19:24 AM AEST
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Hi,
A sharp, but flowing upbeat piece of poetry
giving much to think on. Spot on.
Well said.
T
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Re: Imperfect Humanity
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 09:43:30 PM AEST
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That was a slick passage.
The artistic depth was amazing.
It's interesting to see a work of genius.
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