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Tears
Contributed by
dreampoet32
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Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 05:52:35 AM in AEST
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Can't stop the tears as they
spill from my eyes..
Can't stop this sharp pain in my heart,
I think I might die..
Why did you leave me alone? When
you went to that better place?
I wanted to go with you , but you
went somewhere I couldn't chase..
Now I sit here wishing you was next
to me to ease this pain..
I know in my heart this can't be, so
my tears will continue to fall like rain..
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2012-09-21 05:52:35]
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Re: Tears
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 09:21:10 AM AEST
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| WOW! WHAT A HEART FELT WRITE LOVE IT. |
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Re: Tears
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 12:55:07 PM AEST
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| As I read this, my tears did fall. I lost my best friend last year, and she has been on my mind. Your words brought both the pain and the memory of her. I like the positive end. Thank you for this little release. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd September 2012 @ 02:12:17 AM AEST
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never, don't say, you never would forget, because you wouldn't, you don't need to. Tears fall on me when I see even a new face, a precious one. A precious stone, Lord of the Rings, touch this life that touches you.
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: Tears
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 24th September 2012 @ 07:59:00 PM AEST
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aww this is sad and i think we can all relate to this in points of our lives.. love how its so short but very deep and heart felt..
vampyress jenni |
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