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Rough Draft
Contributed by
MichaelM93
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Monday, 1st October 2012 @ 04:45:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I may just be a kid
but Id move the mountains for you if I could
pick the moon from the sky
illuminate our world with a new light
reveal the scars we hide during the day
just lay with me and Ill kiss them away
start over new
theres no shame in the past
our tears and our actions helped shape us
but we can change
move on from the past
write a new future, and toss out our rough draft
Copyright ©
MichaelM93
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2012-10-01 04:45:14]
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Re: Rough Draft
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 1st October 2012 @ 06:24:14 PM AEST
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I really was touched by this: love is an experience I am both enjoying and enduring. My emotions reflect those in your poem and it's just wonderful to relate to something like that! Keep writing and God bless you,
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Re: Rough Draft
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 6th October 2012 @ 06:32:31 AM AEST
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thanks for sharing
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