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Bitter Innocence
Contributed by
poet17
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Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 10:18:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The innocence of a child in winters tears,
Making angels on the ground, not a care in her mind
Her red rose cheeks, her watery eyes and her runny nose are all symptoms of her inner anguish
As the snow continues to fall, it is like rocks that fall upon her fragile head
Shes too young to look for healing,
So her mother comforts her with Hot Chocolate as to hide the truth from her,
Her mother gave her an artificial Band-Aid subject to fail at its job, and she still ends up broken
She lives in prolonged darkness and was never exposed to the sun
It was about the midnight hour of Christmas Eve with the Christmas stockings set up with all its lights with bright colors and fake presents under the Christmas tree
Her father had come home in a crazed state of mind!
As he entered the house, all was fatally quiet and deathly still but their dog in the backyard wouldnt stop crying
Her father ran up the stairs screaming and banging the walls consumed with anger
He stands in the hallway of the girls room and she knew she was in trouble.
So she prayed and begged and cried out to God for Him to listen
Where are you God? Please save me now!
Life is like being on stage but the curtain closes on you
In this case before the father could even break through the door,
God took her and she was delivered in a moment of time
It is in the moments when we feel like God isnt there, that we should kneel at His throne and clasp our hands
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Re: Bitter Innocence
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 10:04:18 PM AEST
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Such a vivid scene played out here with your words. I have tears in my eyes. Another one I felt, nicely written.
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Re: Bitter Innocence
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 04:20:25 PM AEST
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thanks for sharing my friend
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Re: Bitter Innocence
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 14th October 2012 @ 06:00:58 AM AEST
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| well done. |
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