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Make Way
Contributed by
kailas
on
Thursday, 18th October 2012 @ 04:08:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A crack of bright light led the way
for the storm
The smack of a drum
signaled the warning
Seconds pass and the world makes room for nature's destruction
The quick loud thump of the suicidal rain drops falling and splat
The natural forces running into each other
they collide
The earth ripped and torn
as it makes way
For the storm.
Copyright ©
kailas
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2012-10-18 16:08:22]
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Re: Make Way
(User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on
Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 10:47:59 AM AEST
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| Oh, the imagery within your words. I like the flow, and the pictures it brought to mind. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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