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Red Mist
Contributed by
flavellm
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Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 03:35:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The red mist
blurs my vision
distorts my senses
Tauro Tauro
Jaw is twitching
fists clenched
My anxious surroundings
sliding out of view
Tauro Tauro
A stupid smirk
bares it's teeth
in a final sneer
my blood is now spitting
coarsing through searing veins
My face growing dangerously pale
TAURO TAURO
The red mist
boiling bloods condensation
TAURO TAURO
In a wild wicked haze
a smack and a wail
gasps on mortified faces as restrained arms flail
something malignant now cowers pathetically on the floor
breath still hard
thoughts still wild
in time the red mist will dissipate
my heaving chest will begin to deflate
the ugly echo of fragments of sound it's sobering tones of dissapointment and disgust
will hurl me back into conciousness
and with a sullen face and artificial answer
I will apologise
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2012-10-22 15:35:39]
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Re: Red Mist
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by ValDohren on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 09:16:16 AM AEST
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Excellent write - very descriptive.
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