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Sabby
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Wednesday, 24th October 2012 @ 08:11:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Wandering along the pavement
Proceeding to the means of my way home
I stride humbly and without bounce
Till I am induced to pivot at the sound
Of affection and a friendly reminder
Oh how my walk turns to joyful a run
It was Sabby which you called aloud
The name I cherish and it's origin
Many times my heart fluttered from it
In the halls, on my phone, in my mind
Oh my world brightens when you call me Sabby
Memories flood my mind at its sound
And the younger girl reunites with the young lady
Running to embrace the Nikolai of my past and present
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2012-10-24 20:11:28]
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Re: Sabby
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th October 2012 @ 09:21:14 PM AEST
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Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Sabby
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 25th October 2012 @ 12:58:24 AM AEST
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| It was Sabby you called, the name I cherish, with winter approaching in the Uk it's this kind of wonderful connection that will provide the warmth to take us through.True poetry, where you as a writer is generous enough to give us something of your life to bring connection and joy to ours. |
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Re: Sabby
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 08:19:57 PM AEST
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Life is about holding on to the things that make us happy and letting go of the things that make us sad.
You certainly seem to have found one of the "keep" items of life :)
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Re: Sabby
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by ming on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 12:29:47 AM AEST
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| Whenever a poem can tell a story or bekon us with a puzzle, IMO it's done it job. As this one has. Great write. |
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