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Sirens Daughter
Contributed by
NikaShortyyCakeFolsom
on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 12:04:53 AM in AEST
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Eye's deeper than the darkest sea
You wonder and wonder how can this be
Hair as soft as a lambs wool
Keep coming closer you fool
Skin paler than the moon
The closer you are to your doom
Lips of the rosiest red
Have you not noticed your comrades dead?
The beckoning call in the sweetest tones
Did u not hear his tortured groans?
Laugh sweet as dripping honey
Don't you know it's your death that's funny?
Razor sharp teeth are soon revealed
There's no escape your doom is sealed
Close your eyes as she drowns you in the water
Let this be a warning to all, watch out for the Sirens Daughter
Copyright ©
NikaShortyyCakeFolsom
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2012-10-28 00:04:53]
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Re: Sirens Daughter
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 12:39:21 AM AEST
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This is unconditionally and unquestionably great poetry.
should it be considered to those who dare take foolish the foolish leap, oh you bet ya.
Thank you --- I don't want to know what made you think of this, and at the same time the ignorant male in me might.
It's really good, the male fantasy played out all the way,
the ghost of checking out some babe innocently enough.
You paint all the half-neutered adolescent teenage boys dilemma that lies in the middle aged males ungainly grins.
Thanks --- what you say should be said, and hopefully heeded!!!
great writing |
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Re: Sirens Daughter
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by Rylo on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 01:07:59 AM AEST
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| Nice piece here I will be looking for more from you. |
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Re: Sirens Daughter
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by ValDohren on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 07:36:40 AM AEST
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| Deep and interesting write - enjoyed the read. |
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Re: Sirens Daughter
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by gypsymaddness on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 06:12:19 PM AEST
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| Wicked. Evil. And true. Beware of the sirens daughter :-). Love it! :-) |
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