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Wounded
Contributed by
facade
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Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 01:41:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Youve left me wounded
With nothing left to give
Exhausted and frail
Just crumbling on whats left within
I speak these words
But I speak with a ruined tongue
The words that fall from my mouth
Arent meant for anyone
A crippled ship
Passing through the night
But nobody notices me limp
Stumbling out of sight
Ill find somewhere
To call my own
To find refuge in
And suffer all alone
But in this shell
I was once new
And in my heart
I once held you
Copyright ©
facade
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2012-10-28 01:41:59]
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Re: Wounded
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 01:45:09 AM AEST
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| Very deep and very well written great piece. |
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Re: Wounded
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by NightMareShoGun on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 02:55:49 AM AEST
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| Nice one |
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Re: Wounded
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by ValDohren on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 07:31:55 AM AEST
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| Heartfelt write - a crippled ship, a great metaphor. Good one |
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